MY TALK WITH NATURE!
{It was an unusual trip coinciding my work and pleasure together. It was a visit to
govt., to find schools in the interiors of kutchh and check weather the children there suffer
from the deficiency disorder or not. It was, during this purpose of visit, I happen to pass from
the little runn of kutchh. With the mercy of our boring driver and a strict mentor, I managed
To wait and see this raw beauty of nature. It was 2 in the afternoon; sun was smiling heavily
on us. There was nothing else around us except a rough sandy playground with wild bushes
. Amidst all this some sort of colorful bird (please spare me coz I am bad with the specific Nomenclature of beasts and birds around me) walked gracefully in front of our car...and
it looked as if it was seeking nothing. It was probably a purposeless walk for that creature but
it triggered some innocent questions within me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! }
{Moving further ahead in my aimless but work loaded trip, I next went to a coastline. It was a pleasing site for my darling eyes to see nothing but different shades of the colour blue! Nothing was cool there though. It was still very hot and sum was mercilessly still laughing on us with a wide mouth. And suddenly there was a wave of wind that kissed my flesh………so soothing, so heavenly. While tuning on to all these notes I still courageously continued my chatting with nature…..}
{It is actually the nature itself who teaches us how to feel the greatness and when to be soft-spoken and down to earth. Whenever we hold the power to rule in any aspect of life we at times laugh at the situations and people below us, we ridicule them often. But we forget that this rise is attained only in comparison to those who cannot rise to a level where we are placed. So to define height there has to be a base. And so to define pleasure there is an existence of pain!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!}
MY TALK WITH NATURE!
Barrenness on the soiled crust
And a little blowing of the wind;
With saluting exclamation O Nature!
You keep this unevenness so neat!
On a sunned path with rawness around
A graceful bird crosses our way...
With beautifying interrogation O Nature
Where from you bring them the seeds and rain?
Look the blueness of this wavy sea
I feel under the heavenly sky, a sweet breeze
With an artistic request O Nature:
Show me your way of shading these strokes with an ease!
On a rock I learn, from the base, what height is!
A scratch from a sharp weed makes my red drops to settle!
With surprising eagerness O Nature;
Make me know thy ratio of thorns to the petals!
SORRY FOR UTILIZING YOUR PRECIOUS TIME
LOVE
PARTH

i liked the write up before the poem much much more... some talent you have that i didnt know of... refined language and deep thoughts.... i like it... :)
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beautiful expressions parth and really astonding language used! so glad to know that one of my men friends :-) also writes so intensly and with truest emotions... your fascination for nature is so very well felt through ur words... keep it up... love to see your work on ur blog! :-) i got some hard competitor to write better nd better... :-)
ReplyDeleteno seriously, u have strong abilities to be a decent poet! :-)
to Himalee
ReplyDeleteo no competition girl...u write much better than i do...i have read it so m sayin this....it is just an expression which i thought sharing!! and thanx for liking it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great writeup Parth! I could actually feel the sweltering heat and the gushing sounds of waves while I was reading.
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Hey Parth, I got goosebumps reading this..the wording and feeling expressed r just flawless...I Actually started crying while reading this....it bought me back my memories spent in India....:))
ReplyDeleteKeep writing such articles....:)
Awesome... aweosme... thought. Beautiful depiction of a simple thought. Write more...
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